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For this assignment I read an article titled, "Collective Farming." I found it hard to follow, hard to read, and; therefor, it lost my attention several times. It felt like the author was putting more information into some countries, i.e. Russia, than say, Laos which was barely started. It also read as a little one sided toward Russia. In the opening paragraph Marx is cited. If this were an essay, the opening paragraph would need to be more inclusive of all the countries listed. See below for other changes I would make:


 * Alphabetical listing of countries for ease of look-up
 * Keep all article the same length
 * Give general overview of that countries farming procedures instead of going in-depth into politics and leadership.
 * Possibly list the larger countries or use the continents as a heading and then outline sub-groups underneath.

It appears as though the original author rambled on and has been rambling since 2004, according to the pages Talk, which it also looks as though there may have been some minor disagreements of ownership. After reading both the article and the Talk it is easy to see why the article is still in its infancy after so many years.