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Article evaluation
This is my article evaluation of the article "Soviet women in World War II."

The sections for the pilots, land forces, and partisans do not contain any sources to verify the claims written within them. However, all but two of the citations applied to the rest of the article appear to be reliable. The page that was linked for Soviet Women Pilots in the Great Patriotic War no longer exists and the link for Women and the Soviet Military says that it is currently unavailable. I think there could be more detail discussing the specific roles Soviet women had during the war and the latest talk post mentioned trying to find sources for the specific numbers of women assigned where, such as for secretarial work, medical service, or combat units. ATASU (talk) 01:16, 28 January 2018 (UTC)

Soviet women in World War II article addition test
The number of women in the Soviet military in 1943 was 348,309, 473,040 in 1944, and then 463,503 in 1945. Of the medical personnel in the Red Army, 40% of paramedics, 43% of surgeons, 46% of doctors, 57% of medical assistants, and 100% of nurses were women.

Article evaluation
This is my article evaluation of the article "Carolingian Empire."

The article appears to be potentially biased for the achievements of Charles Martel. An example is this quote from the text; "Martel was also the founder of all the feudal systems and merit system that marked the Carolingian Empire, and Europe in general during the Middle Ages, though his son and grandson would gain credit for his innovations." As there are no citations to help find information on any of the claims, I cannot know if the information is true. In fact, there are very few citations for sources placed anywhere in this article. However, there is a citation attached to the sentence "Considered a milestone in European history, the Oaths of Strasbourg symbolize the birth of both France and Germany." The citation's link sources a Deutsche Welle article authored by Matthias von Hellfeld. I cannot verify the reliability of the source and would prefer a more professional and reliable one to provide the information. The section on Capitularies feels unnecessary and there are no citations for the information in this area. This section includes the list of "The five greatest capitularies of Charlemagne’s reign" and it gives no information on why these are the greatest capitularies of Charlemagne's reign. To make the list more complete for this article on the empire's history, the capitulary list should include all the capitularies from the reigns of all of the emperors if it is possible. --ATASU (talk) 02:19, 8 November 2017 (UTC)

The reign of Charlemagne article addition test
Charlemagne's reign was one of near constant warfare, many of the campaigns he led personally. He seized the Lombard Kingdom in 774, led a failed campaign into Spain in 778, extended his domain into Bavaria in 788, ordered his son Pepin to campaign against the Avars in 795, and conquered Saxon territories in wars and rebellions fought from 772 to 804.