User:ATireOnFire/Hagersville Tire Fire/ValB13 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(ATireOnFire)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User%3AATireOnFire%2FHagersville_Tire_Fire&diff=1148019023&oldid=1145585226&diffmode=source


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ATireOnFire/Hagersville_Tire_Fire?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

My main criticism was adding more hyperlinks to the draft. I know that many of them have been added by the time that I am writing this review including the St-Amable link that I provided to Ryan. I would change this title: "Hagersville, Ontario and Environs" to be: "Hagersville, Ontario and surroundings". I think the amount of sources provided is very good some sections of the text should have more references.