User:AWD20/PQBP1/Vmt19 Peer Review

General info
AWD20
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:AWD20/PQBP1
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):PQBP1

Evaluate the drafted changes
Numerous additions have been made to the article, most importantly clarify certain words in jargon heavy sections from the original wiki page. The one issue I have is there are plenty of words present in the lead especially that could be hyperlinked to other wiki pages for further explanation. Sources also have not been in-text cited as of yet however I do note several new sources present in the bibliography.