User:AWFarrow/Greene and Greene/Emmitross Peer Review

General info
AWfarrow
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Greene and Greene
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AWFarrow/Greene_and_Greene?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Lead
The lead is concise and provides a good overview of the article. I do not believe it was necessary to tweak the lead and it was left alone.

Content
The added content is very relevant to the article and provides important information about the inspirations of the Greene brothers. There is a small section about dougongs that is not relevant to the article.

Tone and Balance
The content added is fair and objective. It is simply factual and does not favor any particular position.

Sources and References
The sources are reliable and accurately reflected in the article content.

Organization
The content added is organized in a logical fashion and it is easy to read.

Images and Media
The student added a well captioned and relevant image that enhances the readers understanding of the article.

Overall Impressions
The content added definitely enhances the article and gives the reader a better understanding of the topic. The section on dougongs has some extraneous information not relevant to the Greene brothers. Other than that the additions are very nice.