User:A Small Rat/Serapeum of Saqqara/ImplicitPandemonium Peer Review

General info
A Small Rat
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:A Small Rat/Serapeum of Saqqara
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Serapeum of Saqqara

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead section is edited minorly but I think that edit is good. The edits to the body of the article are detailed and add a good amount of information. You link to all the relevant Wikis where you can and all the information you are adding are on topic and good. There isn't much I would say to add or change as everything you've added thus far is great and on topic. Your sources, to me, are strong and varied so as to avoid any one perspective.