User:Aaaaaaaac123/Gabrielle Laïla Tittley/Ishymomo Peer Review

Good concise lead, described Gabrielle Laila Tittley well. The content was relevant and up to date, outlining Tittley's work in a neutral tone. Well sourced, and all the links matched. I didn't see any academic peer-reviewed journals sourced, (its possible that there just aren't any about this artist), and most of the sources were from reliable news papers and websites, so that's good. The writing was clear and organized, there were a couple sentences that I found a little awkwardly worded but overall very good. I added a header for your references just to make it a bit more organized. I would have maybe added a section about Tittley's store "Pony", because it was in the lead but not discussed later. I would love to see some pictured of the artists work in the article, but that would be hard to get while following Wikipedia's guidelines. Overall very well done!

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