User:AadityaGupta19/Chopine/Kquinn177 Peer Review

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:AadityaGupta19/Chopine
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Chopine

Evaluate the drafted changes
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She added good, relevant details that were missing from the original article. The tone of the added information is very neutral and factual, and backed up by information in the articles. It seems like there might be some more information in the sources that could be incorporated into the article. This is a really concise, well-written draft.