User:Aaishahkhan/sandbox

Work Log:
September 23rd- I chose my topic, found sources for it and described my temporary plan for this Wikipedia project (1.5 hours)

September 27th- Created a work log (5 min)

Comments from Heather:
9/25- You're on the right track, Aaishah! You also need a work log with dates and times you worked on the project.

The sources won't work as is since only people with a Butte College account can access the articles. Instead, please use MLA format and provide a complete citations (author, title, publication, date) for each of these, okay? I also added headings which makes the page easier to read. Keep it up!

10/4- I'm glad the feedback was helpful...have you had a chance yet to update these sources in MLA format? That should be the next thing you do. I also I suggest you copy and paste the part of your article you want to improve into this Sandbox. (You can just create a new heading for it below, the way Amanda does in her Sandbox.) Then you can have me and other professionals look at it before you move it to the Wikipedia main space.

10/16- Sources still need to be updated in MLA format. I can give you scores once you create and fill in a work log with what you're working on, what dates, and for how long. "Thank you for your feedback Heather!"

10/21- I am having some technical difficulties trying to fix the references. For some reason, I am not allowed into the Butte Library online (where I got my sources from), I need access to that to get the information to make the correct citation


 * Hi Aaishah - there are couple reasons you are not able to access the library online. Sometimes it's as simple as using another browser. If you could get in contact with me directly by phone or email I can help you troubleshoot. Email: germarti@butte.edu Phone: 530-879-4067 -Tia (Librarian)

What I'm working on:
I chose the article on "Clean Eating", while I was going through the article I first noticed how short of an article it is, meaning it will require more research and editing. Another thing I noticed was that the references were mostly from magazines and documentaries, which to me are not valid references for a science based topic. I feel like there should be more scientific and medical resources to make a proper claim in this article. I went through the talk page and didn't find much to work with either. A lot of the article barely touches on the information given, for example when it talks about Osteoporosis and Orthorexia Nervosa. I will try to contribute in fixing these issues while using resources from the Butte College Library. I did a little research and found the following references to use: