User:Aajani9C/Central Valley's Health Risk of Immigrants/Jenniferguerra514 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Aajani9C, Wrukhsar


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Aajani9C/Central Valley's Health Risk of Immigrants


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

After reading this, everything was well thought of and written out well. The only thing I noticed was that there were some grammar and spelling errors. I liked how you introduced your topic in the beginning and what it is. This makes it easier to the reader to know and what to expect while reading. It then leads to the body which is well layed out. Has all the correct information in order, but maybe a few grammar errors. But besides that, all the information was great and really good to understand. The reference page was also written out well.