User:Aajani9C/Central Valley's Health Risk of Immigrants/Js4111 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Aajani9C


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Aajani9C/Central_Valley's_Health_Risk_of_Immigrants?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The text so far is very clear and well divided. I think the topic is interesting and it is relevant to the class. The content is neutral, unbiased, and very informational. There is a good amount of text but I think we might need a bit more references as there are only two to quite a large amount of text. The citations that the draft has now are good and reliable. There aren't images, I don't know what images could be added though, if any. Looks good so far.