User:Aakandiciabatta/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
I am evaluating Andy Schor's Wikipedia article.

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I have chosen to evaluate this article because Andy Schor is the Mayor of Lansing, and I currently attend Michigan State University. It will be interesting to see what Andy Schor does, and read about his life and history. My preliminary impression of the article was that it is quite short compared to some of the other Mayors.

Evaluate the article
I think that the lead section of this article is clean, concise, and easy to understand making it a good introduction to Mayor Andy Schor. I think that the tone and balance of the article is very good. I can't sense any sort of bias and the sentences are constructed in a way that allows information to spread rather than persuasion. The strongest aspect of this article is its quality of writing. It is extremely concise and to the point and while it may lack details that some Mayors have, I think that it is written in a way that makes it hard to notice. I do wish that there were more images of Andy Schor in the article, as they only provide a headshot of him. The sources and citations seem to be up-to-date and unbiased. They are also all provided in the article. Overall, I think that this article is extremely well written and although it isn't the longest or the most detailed, it still provides valuable unbiased and correct information about Andy Schor.