User:Aalr7903/OLES2129/

 Activity 1 - From Scratch 

The article chosen was focused on the Ford GT40, a racing vehicle from the 1960s. The initial submission of the page was extremely brief and lacking relevant details, structure and images.

In my opinion, a listing of the vehicle’s specifications would be one of the most important details added. It would be added at the beginning of the page as a brief profile and will include information such as vehicle production details, engine and mechanical specifications and notable awards and titles won by the vehicle. Much more details are required for the rest of the page, including history, races, significance in car and popular culture and later models inspired by the GT40.

Also, the page did not include any images. As an editor, I would have added images of every variation of the vehicle, photographs of the Le Mans Race (in which the vehicle gained its popularity) and of the figures involved i.e. Henry Ford II. I believe they are crucial pieces of information to include.

Finally, the original submission used only one source. This has proved insufficient through the lack of information and therefore as an editor I would include many more sources to maximise relevant information.