User:Aaralyn02/Acanthochitona armata/Jacobk7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Aaralyn02


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Aaralyn02/Acanthochitona armata


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Acanthochitona armata

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I think that this draft is a good step in the right direction. I liked how you were able to find what the native Hawaiians used Acanthochitona armata for. You have added in some good facts that were not included in the original wikipedia article. How would you integrate your information with the information already available in the article? The article already gives the order of the organism and I see that you are giving the phylum. I like how you added the size, color, and more information on where they can be found. Maybe you could work on getting more references because I think we were supposed to have five. All in all I feel as if you did a great job.

PEER Review response: Thank you for your help! I didn't realize we were supposed to include the information already included in the first article, so thank you for the heads-up. I'll work on adding more references!