User:Aaro2001/Religion and LGBT people/Averd7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Aaro2001


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Aaro2001/Religion_and_LGBT_people?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Religion and LGBT people

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

To start off, strong introduction. Let me know that you're giving an overview on the topic. Check punctuation. At certain places periods/commas are required. Flows nice and seems to stay neutral throughout making it easy to understand. Overall, the edits done thus far adds more to the topic. Keep it up!