User:Aasal.pdx/Faxonius neglectus/Aasal.pdx Peer Review

General info
DataAndSpot
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Faxonius neglectus
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Faxonius neglectus

Evaluate the drafted changes
I would recommend adding more detail regarding the diet. I would also add more detail regarding the female because it seems a little unbalanced compared to the makes. Also, for the sake of readability, I would not use the scientific name throughout the article. I understand that it makes it sound more scientific and factual, but majority of the public might not know how to pronounce Faxonius neglectus. Also--each time you are describing something, I would add in a picture. I would also add in more information regarding its impacts to its invasive range and how it has affected any of the species around that area. I would also consider adding in more pictures when you are talking about the different ranges that they are native to in general, map pictures help a lot with visualization.