User:AbFisch/sandbox

Zero Spanish Magazine:

-expand on "financial issues" as to why no new publications have been released after November 2009. What was the societal response of it having stopped being published? Were there other reasons as to why it was closed other than financial?

-Remove links that are red, these lead to pages that do not exist

-"Each issues was approximately 150 pages long" to "Each issue was an average of 150 pages long".

Daniel's:

-Add other sections besides history

-Why did María del Carmen Tobar open the bar?

-How did the bar gain popularity?

-What were some of the challenges Tobar faced in having opened one of the first gay bars in Spain?

-Delete/condense some physical descriptions and add some historical events that happened there

-Remove red links

-Make a raw translation to Spanish

-Reconfigure sentences that start with "Because"

-Another way of saying "technically legal"

-"Tobar suspected it was related to the 1970s, and check if women were not "social dangerousness" or "vagrants and crooks". Sentence does not make sense. Change the law's name of "social dangerousness" in English on Wikipedia, also mentioned in the sentence before. Maybe "women were not a source of social danger or could be characterized as vagrants or crooks".

-"One of the first lesbian bars in Spain", so what were the others that existed?

Tony's Gay Bar:

-First gay bar in Spain, make an English and Spanish page for it