User:Abagge6/Lynette Yiadom-Boakye/Ejleonh680 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Abagge6, Imire1, Kayeuraa,


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Abagge6/Lynette_Yiadom-Boakye?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lynette Yiadom-Boakye

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The changes that you all have begun to draft here seem to very much be on the right track. The "edit notes" section you've posted at the top of the page looks like quite a substantive outline for taking care of the major revisions that need to be made on this article. In particular, I appreciate your decision to include "critical perspectives" of her work. I feel that this is quite useful for contextualizing the basic knowledge you've offered about her life and work within an ongoing scholarly conversation.

Of course, I'm also quite impressed by you all's attempt to get in touch with Yiadom-Boakye's gallery. (For photos, I presume?)

Finally, the revisions you're are in the process of making to her biography look like they will be quite helpful. One thing you might consider is adding information, if it's available, about the styles of art she was trained in during her time in the English art school system. Moreover, how does she put this training in conversation with her African heritage (if at all)?