User:Abagge6/Lynette Yiadom-Boakye/Madisonvital Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

abagge6


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Abagge6/Lynette_Yiadom-Boakye?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lynette Yiadom-Boakye

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that your sandbox draft is extremely thorough and well thought out, everything appears to be organized with no grammatical errors. Here are just a few suggestions/additions I would make to your preexisting work:

--Try finding her exact birthdate

--Along with mentioning the critical reviews of her work, I would suggest adding her international recognition if there is any information

--Add any information regarding her personal life (past or present) outside of her artistry