User:Abagge6/Lynette Yiadom-Boakye/Miyadurey Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Abagge6, Imire1, Kayeuraa


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Abagge6/Lynette_Yiadom-Boakye?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lynette Yiadom-Boakye

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like the set up of your drafted article, I think that it has a good flow to it! Looking at the current published article, I would find a picture of Lynette Yiadom-Boakye to add to the page. I would add more information to the lead if you can find any. I see that you noted you left out the art work section but it is good to note that it is coming! I would do a thorough description of each piece of artwork as well as if it has won any awards and where it was showcased. I also appreciate noting which resources are scholarly and which are not, I believe that that is a good idea.