User:Aballison/Loyalist (American Revolution)/Hannah.Leanne.Moore Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Aballison


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Aballison/Loyalist_%28American_Revolution%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Loyalist (American Revolution)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Everything in this article is relevant to the article topic! Your addition is eccellent, but the transition from your added portion, into the next is a little awkward.  Maybe the portion of the article that reads, " In fact, many women were punished in this way." should be removed, or edited.
 * The article is neutral!
 * No viewpoints are overrepresented, or underrepresented.
 * I could not find the links to test them on your Bibliography, so I don't know if the source support the claims in the article.
 * From what I can see, the sources you do have are neutral sources.
 * No information is out of date.