User:Aballison/Loyalist (American Revolution)/Wesleymuse Peer Review

Your additions are very well written and explained, providing a clear image and feeling for the reader. Only criticism I have is that I would include more about the political views and issues going on between the loyalists and the opposing party, so there is something to compare their ways against. Other than that, the writing is great and well explained, as well as the grammer and punctuation. I added a couple periods where they were missing. - Wesley

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