User:Abatra21/Beta oxidation/CrayfishClarinetist Peer Review

General info
Abatra21 and Sylee00
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 * User:Abatra21/Beta oxidation
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 * Beta oxidation:

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Lead
Article lead has not been edited, but first sentence is extremely long, could maybe benefit from breaking into two separate sentences.

Content
Good added content in "Even-numbered saturated fatty acids" descriptions.

New "General Mechanism" expands upon process, very informative

Tone and Balance
Tone is neutral, no unsubstantiated claims.

Sources and References
Added needed citation in Energy yield section.

All new citations appear to be from reputable scientific sources.

Organization
For some of the longer sentences involving a lot of abbreviations, might benefit from splitting into separate sentences.

Not sure if possible, but if there's math formatting available, like LaTeX, it could make the calculations in energy yield look more professional.

Like how you made the math more clear on what is actually being calculated.

Images and Media
"Steps in beta-oxidation of odd-numbered saturated fatty acids" figure is useful and well made, but could be made bigger if possible.

Overall impressions
Lots of really valuable additions to this article! New content is well cited, and the new figure looks great. I think in general, the entire article could use some tidying up, it feels crowded and cramped in places, and the "Activation and membrane transport" steps 1-4 figure juts oddly off the page. Really good work!