User:Abatra21/Beta oxidation/Ezpzii Peer Review

General info
Abatra21
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Abatra21/Beta oxidation
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Beta oxidation

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the draft article gives very detailed information about Beta Oxidation.

I'm a little confused about the General Mechanism section that was added. What is the difference between the bolded text and the unbolded text? Is this going to replace the information that is already in the article? I think that the information you added in you sandbox contains details that are not in the article already, but I think that the article also contains good details that are not in your sandbox.

For the Energy Yield, it might be helpful to add why in practice only 14 ATP are produced, not 17.

Make sure to include citations. I think there is a duplicate citation? (Rodwell, Victor, 2015)

Although it is just in the sandbox, perhaps organize the structure to match the article. Ie. the General Mechanism section should be in the beginning, not the end.

Perhaps, you can revise the section about energy yield for clarity. It can get a little confusing just listing different molecules and their ATP count. Maybe bullet points or shorter sentences will help add clarity.

In the General Mechanism section, what is Figure 1? I think a figure will be very beneficial!