User:Abbeeee/Pinkwashing (breast cancer)/Mlima4 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Abbeeee


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Abbeeee/Pinkwashing (breast cancer)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pinkwashing (breast cancer)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content added is relatable to the topic. The sources are thorough and up to date. Content is clear and easy to understand. it is also neutral. There are no images added. I would add more information about the topic as well as add their references. In general this article needs a lead but the article itself has a clear structure, balanced coverage, neutral content, and reliable sources.