User:Abbey Evans/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Retail design - Wikipedia

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Retail design is something that has always interested me. Often, we don't think when we walk into a store that it has been designed to appeal to the greatest number of customers. This article shows where it began and different ways retail is designed to fit customer needs.

Evaluate the article
The title itself could be more catching. History is an aspect in the article so it could be named something along: "The History and How To's of Retail Design". Though that may be too out there for a title, but "Retail Design" seems rather broad. It is laid out rather well. It begins with history and then how it is used. I feel it could use some more examples. Take Walmart and their ways of creating the most appealing customer experience and use it to have one of the highest selling grocery stores out there. That would especially show why it's important. There is a vast number of references though that make this article feel legit and well researched.