User:Abbie.grieser/"An Egyptian Cigarette"/Jsnarr Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jsnarr


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Abbie.grieser/"An Egyptian Cigarette"
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
Still needs critical reviews from when it was initially published and more depth in other sections.

The content is presented well, relevant, and detailed. The topic does fall under a under represented population and time period of female authors. Great!

All info is neutral and is balanced and organized well.

Your sources are formatted correctly and look good.

Overall, for the length of your story, this looks well presented!