User:Abbie.grieser/"An Egyptian Cigarette"/Skirby0923 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Abbie.grieser


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Abbie.grieser/%22An_Egyptian_Cigarette%22?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Abbie, it looks like you have a really great start! Your analysis is very informative and does a great job of breaking down the text. I think at this point you need to add the literary reactions/criticisms. Your summary is also very good and well-formatted. I am excited to see the end result!