User:AbbieAver/Coureur des bois/KayleeT1127 Peer Review

Hi! I think what you've got is a great starting point. Your sources were credible and reputable. I think adding a "reputation" section is a great idea and could easily be added under the "lifestyle" topic of this page. However, I would make sure that you're adding new information to the page rather than restating what is already included. Earlier sections of the article mention the conflict with the Canadians as well as the tendency for the coureurs to take on native culture. Is there anything from Dolin that you could add that would be new information to the article?

Also, make sure to double check your article for typos! The current wikipedia article refers to them as "coureur des bois" while your contribution uses a capital "Coureur des bois." I would make sure your formatting is consistent with the current article.

The coureurs show a very unique and interesting look into the fur trade. Are there any diaries they kept that you could include? There is a lot of potential here, and I really think you're on the right track! Good luck with the rest of this project.

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