User:Abbybh/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Diana Buist

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
It is a wikipedia article on my mom, I figured I would be able to accurately edit the page.

Evaluate the article
lead section: yes, yes, no, concise

content: yes, no; the content only goes up until 2019, leaving her working at her old job. missing content only because it is not up to date. no

tone and balance: yes, no, no, yes, no

sources and references: yes, yes, yes, yes, yes some, yes

organization and writing quality: yes, no, yes

images and media: no images used

talk page: no conversations, it was made during women's history month

overall impressions: very good, accurate, the strength is the style of writing and the accuracy in which it's written in. Adding more information that is more current. I think that it is a little underdeveloped, however it is well made.