User:Abbybh/Mass media and American politics/Ava.burnhamm Peer Review

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Abbybh
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I think you did a great job with these suggestions. Your first point of adding more recent social media platforms I very much agree with. Not only should TikTok be added, but also I would include Instagram. I feel like this platform has had a large impact on political communication due to the posts, stories, reels, and memes that are shared throughout the app. Even more so than TikTok, Instagram is utilized by so many especially to express political thoughts. Your second suggestion about the contemporary media section needing to be updated is also something I agree with. AI is something that could be included, however also how mass media has created mis information in certain political situations and topics. This is a significant aspect of recent advancements in technologies. I also think there could be more information and time spent on the television era portion. It is not nearly as equal to the other sections in this article.