User:Abbybh/Mass media and American politics/Ella-hall1234 Peer Review

Ella Hall Peer review-

I really like what you have added so far! I liked how you broke the sections down; that will be really helpful when we actually add our content to the Wikipedia page. I also like how you emphasize adding more information because, looking at the state of the current Wikipedia page, it does seem like there is some slim information. From looking at your sources, I saw pretty good information about the "progressiveness" of media within American politics; however, your section about "progressiveness" and what you are going to add is slim, so I would say maybe add more information to that section, especially because frequently we see on social media when posting political content what makes you "progressive." Overall, I think you are off to an excellent start, and I am excited to see the final product!

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Abbyhb
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Evaluate the drafted changes
- more information about progressiveness

- new deal era on Wikipedia page looks small, so more information there will be helpful

Thank you so much! this was really helpful, I will make sure to add more about the new deal era!