User:Abbylarabee/Print design/Kyle Cameon Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Abbylarabee


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Print design


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Print design

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Abby seems to have a very consise plan for editing on her article. I like the idea of using the talk page to see where the article is already going in terms of changes and additions, and being able to incorperate that into her plan for the article.

I agree with Abby's idea for the need to add on to the history section of her page. definatly has some room for growth and should be interesting to see what she is able to add.

References also look like good reliable sources.