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We feel this article is well researched and provides important / relevant information. Our one thought would be that they could include more information about her role as college president, as it seems to be a small passing note that isn't discussed in much detail. However, it doesn't need to be a big piece as she is a very accomplished person so the other information about her life and work is still relevant. The tone is fair and it is unbiased. It could maybe include an image or two to show what she looks like or add some visual interest, but it is also not 100% necessary given the content.