User:Abd.2348/User:JJ,1of1, AUS/Macrophage/Abd.2348 Peer Review

General info
(JJ,101,AUS)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:JJ,1of1, AUS/Macrophage
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Macrophage

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead part is unchanged and doesn't needs to be changed

Content:


 * 1) Content added is related
 * 2) content is up to date, however some sources are as old as 2014
 * No
 * No, it's based on scientific work which has been done over for decades

Tone and BIas:


 * No
 * No, they all are from peer reviewed articles
 * No, all the points mentioned are generalized
 * No, it merely provides a historical perspective

Sources and References:


 * 1) Yes, they are all from peer reviewed articles found with the AUS Database
 * 2) All the information mentioned by the wikipedian is mentioned on the source in a more detailed way, so hence, they do reflect what's on the article
 * 3) Yes, the sources go into depth about the topic
 * 4) Half of them are current (2021 and 2023) while the other half is out of date (2014 and 2015)
 * 5) Yes, they come from a diverse spectrum of sources for example, different aspects of information were gained from different journals. However, the sources include mostly famous people in the field of science.
 * No, as said before all this information came from peer reviewed articles, however it can be improved by replacing the older sources with newer peer reviewed articles.
 * 1) Yes, they all work

Organization:


 * 1) Yes, its concise and summarized
 * No
 * 1) Yes, it's organized into a singular paragraph as it's talking about only topic. However, there isn't any topic and concluding sentence present so it can be improved by adding that.

Overall Impression:


 * 1) Yes, it has given meaningful context and information for the reader
 * 2) It's concise, well written, related to the topic and has reliable sources
 * 3) It can be improved by using newer sources, and by improving the structure of the paragraph added