User:Abdullahi.mohamedlukasub/Boating/Analiyah315 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Abdullahi.mohamedlukasub


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Abdullahi.mohamedlukasub/Boating?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Boating

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I would add a little more to the lead, other than that I find the editing fine with the footnotes and the word definitions.