User:Abigailmarie99/Julius Richard Petri/Joz27 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Abigailmarie99


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 * User:Abigailmarie99/Julius Richard Petri


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Julius Richard Petri

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Hello, I don't see anything in your sandbox. I went ahead and looked at the existing article on Julius Richard Petri and I have some suggestions. I think one thing that could be improved is the Lead section, as this has very little overview and could be expanded on. There seems to be very little references on this page, so I would review all of the information already written and see if you could add more references. I think you could also expand on his work and his time with Robert Koch.