User:Abigra/Primnoa/Praisides Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Abigail Grassick (Abigra) and Jacqueline Wihardja, enrolled in BI260.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing Primnoa
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Primnoa
 * Primnoa

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead has been revised, and contains a solid overarching sentence of the Primnoa article. Additionally, the lead briefly introduces the subtopics covered later in the article. The lead does not contain information that is not mentioned later, but could also go into more detail. That being said, the brief overview was done well, and is a good addition to the article.

The content added to the Primnoa article is relevant and informative, and I enjoyed reading it. I enjoyed the way that the Taxonomy section was set up, with a nice and clean chart with images, and is easy to follow. I don't think that there is too much information content wise, but the article also does a good job of covering the needed areas of information. The article does include popular and current topics, such as the increasing temperature of the ocean making an uncomfortable habitat for Primnoa.

Overall, the article does not come across as bias, but rather neutrally informative. There is no push in one certain direction, but rather the viewpoint stands at a middle ground.

Overall, the references section of this article is clean, and accurate. The links are thoroughly done, and clickable throughout the article. There seems to be a variety of citations and authors, making for a melting pot of information and substance for the article as a whole.

I did not catch many grammar mistakes, and can assume that the authors spend a solid amount of time and effort working on this assignment.

There are enough images in the article for the reader to enjoy, without being overbearing or in the way. I enjoy the images in the Taxonomy section, as it makes it clear for the reader, and allows the reader to paint a picture in their head of what the article is describing.