User:Abihello6/Seattle Underground/Jalenrose8 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Abihello6


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Abihello6/Seattle_Underground?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Seattle Underground

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: Awesome lead into the article. Gives a perfect idea of what is to come in the rest of the article with good, general context surrounding the topic. Short and sweet, perfect amount of detail.

Content: The history piece is very informative, learned a lot about a city that I have lived in for my entire life. Describing something like a physical structure is pretty hard for readers to imagine without great detail, and that can be hard to do, so I think you should take more advantage of the usage of media/photos and use larger photos to help describe the structures you were going into detail about. I like the added section for touring where you gave the history of tours and even what they look like today. Maybe try separating the two a little more to give yourself the chance to add more details. Great references and information!

Organization: The piece flows very well. A great intro leads into extensive details and it comes full circle in the end when talking about the tours.

Overall: Great read, super informative and informational! Took advantage of your resources and wrote a great article. Great tone as well.