User:AbirWard/User:Paigebodnar/Folk taxonomy/Monicafumagalli Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Paige, Greta, and Tori


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Paigebodnar/Folk taxonomy
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Folk taxonomy

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think all the information provided in what is currently written is strong and neutral but in order to make the reading easier, I think it would be nice if you broke up the sentences full of scientific jargon with more simple sentences. it was easy to get lost in all the big words and get confused. I also think expanding on how this related to linguistic injustice or putting it earlier in the article is important because before getting to the end I wasn't sure how it related to our class.