User:Aboring/Hemiclepsis marginata/Jordannstone Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Aboring
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Aboring/sandbox

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? Yes
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? No
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Possibly? Just a list of sections is seen
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? Yes, it is a rough draft
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? Not constructed

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? Some bulleted information has been added but not much else
 * Is the content added up-to-date? Not sure, references are not hyperlinked
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? Yes, it is a rough draft, a lot is missing.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? So far only a few bulleted information
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? No
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? No

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? Not sure, references are not hyperlinked
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Not sure, references are not hyperlinked
 * Are the sources current? The two sources present are current, 2016 and 2019
 * Check a few links. Do they work? No

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Not much is written
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? Not detected
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? Seems like the outline could be this in the future

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? N/A
 * Are images well-captioned? N/A
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? N/A
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? N/A

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.

There already is an article but its in German


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject? No
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject? Not sure, references are not hyperlinked
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles? Not much has been constructed.
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable? No

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? Not necessarily
 * What are the strengths of the content added? Constructive plan for what might be there later
 * How can the content added be improved? By including established paragraphs.