User:Abossie0820/Letter from Birmingham Jail/Asadiq1119 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Abossie0820,


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Abossie0820/Letter_from_Birmingham_Jail?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Letter from Birmingham Jail

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions,and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hi, I read your sandbox draft and the article. Your paragraph contributed to the article as it spoke about how Martin Luther king heard about the problems the people of Birmingham Alabama faced and so he decided to help the people there. Reading the original article and your draft-- you added it in nicely with the original article. The original article spoke about why King could not wait for the courts to take action: it was simply because they were taking too long. Your article explains how boycotting affected sales in that area. Overall, really nice it blended really nicely with the whole article and actually explained why King had started his work in Birmingham, Alabama.