User:Abossie0820/Letter from Birmingham Jail/Mleo4 Peer Review

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Abossie0820's work


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 * Letter from Birmingham jail


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Evaluate the drafted changes
i believe Alex's article revisions and overall writing are well thought through! i think their writing is perfect as its setting up the historical knowledge of what was going on in Birmingham during the civil rights movement, starting off with the previous attempts from government officials and businesses as well as other organizations to change the segregation and racism of the town, but to no avail. I also think their second paragraph perfectly leads up to the rest of the article, using MLK's meeting with the president to then lead into his Project C as the article then focuses on such.