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Article evaluation

The Wikipedia article on Food Deserts is in general well put together. However, there are many asides and conclusions drawn by the authors. They often present information, then draw a conclusion rather than remaining neutral. There is also a heavy emphasis on primary sources, rather than neutral secondary sources. Scientific studies and information from studies funded by invested groups appear in this article.

Overall, the article is well put together. There are only these few problems with it. Nothing seemed overly irrelevant, the language and tone stayed consistent throughout, and most of the information provided was cited. Some sections were not well developed, but others provided lots of information.

Working Bibliography

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Péloffy, Karine. “Kivalina vs. Exxonmobil: A Comparative Case Comment.” McGill International Jornal of Sustainable Development Law and Policy (2013).

Ruby, Sarah. "Environmental, citizen groups plan to sue owners over dairy." The Bakersfield Californian. September 21, 2005.

Schwartz, John. “Courts as Battlefields in Climate Fights.” The New York Times, January 26, 2010.