User:Abril.reyes1/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Anna Whitlock - Wikipedia

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose to evaluate this article because I wanted to find out more about the overall history of feminism and how Anna Whitlock helped take action for women and their rights.

Evaluate the article
Lead section- The lead section briefly describes who the article is about in 2 sentences, but does not go into further detail about the main sections of the article.

Content- Mostly all the content is relevant to Anna Whitlock's life. Maybe there should be more information on the relevant historic events that were occurring at the time when she was most involved with the women's suffrage movement in Sweden. It is only briefly mentioned that it was suggested that men have two votes, so they could vote for their wives. I think this topic should be further discussed and what actions Anna took during this time.

Tone and balance-The tone throughout the article is neutral. It doesn't try to persuade the reader to believe a certain way. It is strictly based on facts provided.

Sources and references- After reviewing a few of the sources, some seem to not have much information and are not really reliable sources, while others seemed to provide a lot of information and seemed reliable. Other links to sources simply did not work. There aren't many resources to use to cover this topic on the internet, the few that popped up were the ones the publisher had already used.

Organization and writing quality- The article was clear enough to read, and is well organized.

Images and media- There weren't many images available. The writer should have put more images. For example, more images on the National Association for women's suffrage to help the reader understand that women were trying to fight for their rights.

Talk page and discussion- There is no discussion of the article. The article is rated by many Wiki Projects as class C. The article is of interest to many wiki projects, including; wiki project biography, women's history, feminism, and gender studies.

Overall impressions- The article was clear and straight to the point, but I do believe that more information could have been added to help the readers understand Anna Whitlock's life.