User:Abrilzar24/Carceral feminism/Mel849 Peer Review

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Abrilzar24
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Your wikipedia page has a detailed amount of information, you did a really good job! In terms of up-to-dateness, the information regarding the advocacy for marital rape legislation in Australia in the 1970s and 1980s appears accurate. However, it would be beneficial to include more recent developments or changes in these laws, if applicable. For example, mentioning any recent amendments or debates surrounding these issues would enhance the relevance of the content.

Regarding neutrality, the text presents the information in a factual manner without showing bias. It provides a balanced view of the feminist movements' advocacy for legal changes related to sexual assault and domestic violence. However, it would be helpful to include perspectives from different stakeholders, such as legal experts, policymakers, or advocacy groups, to further enhance the discussion. Overall, your content is informative and provides a good foundation for understanding the complexities of carceral feminism, well done!!

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