User:Abro2/Public Health Cigarette Smoking Act/ProfNMat Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Abro2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Abro2/Public_Health_Cigarette_Smoking_Act?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Public Health Cigarette Smoking Act

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: the lead could be expanded to so that it briefly touches on all the major sections of the main article.

Content/Organization: I suggest adding another section "Passage in Congress" right before the 3rd paragraph of the Origins section. Then you can include all the information about the committee hearings, floor consideration and voting in that section. You could also make another section heading called "Provisions" and discuss what is included in the law in that section.