User:Absolute2002/Nadia Benois/M2KHollywood Peer Review

General info
(Absolute2002)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Absolute2002/Nadia Benois
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Nadia Benois

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * The importance of her life and death are necessities in these articles, so I think that is great fact to include in the sources.
 * The fact that she studied under Karl Gussow, is another important fact to include because it shows what influenced her artwork.
 * It always makes an article more interesting to add controversy into an article, so the inserting the facts about how controversial the sexual content of the artist work.
 * The most relevant thing that I feel should be added to the article is more elaboration on why the artist chose to focus so much on the sexual content in his artwork.
 * Otherwise,I think this is going in a positive direction and very informative I would also just look over grammar errors as we all need to reexamine in our work.