User:Aby25duh/Internet celebrity/Krstrekh Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Aby25duh, Internet celebrity


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Aby25duh/Internet_celebrity?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Internet celebrity

Evaluate the drafted changes
The added section has three sources and does not seem biased. The lead was not yet added to the wikipedia page. Tubers are another kind of internet celebrity and it is a good idea to include them into the wiki page. It is not overloaded with information and it gives a well-rounded non biased summary. The content is current as VTubers are growing in popularity more and more these days. The sources come from .org websites indicating that they are more reliable than just .com websites. Some of the sources could be a little more recent as there are some from June of 2021, otherwise the other two are from 2022 which is fairly recent. This topic does not exactly deal with the equity gaps listed by wikipedia. It is a topic that is already written about by many people. It is easy to read and there are no grammar errors. The sources do not all have multiple authors, they are mainly written by one person. It would be beneficial if they had multiple authors because the sources are less biased and also peer reviewed. There could be some images included to help show the readers what VTubers look like. It is a virtual thing so visuals would enhance this section.