User:Acaebow1/Dogs in religion/Ashleeyy Peer Review

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Acaebow1
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Acaebow1/Dogs in religion
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Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead


 * The lead provides good information to what is newly provided in the body. I like that you expanded on the subject of the cultures and religions and the underlying sides such as spiritual rituals and purity. I think the opening has the perfect amount of information, as it doesn't overdo it and you do already go in with a source right away; just to further explain the significance in the article, so good job!

Content

 * The content is very neutral all throughout, the article is about dogs in general. It isn't very possible to be biased in this specific subject although it is religion. Overall, you do a good job at explaining the different significance of "the dog" through the religions/cultures mentioned. I do also like that you started with Egyptian beliefs, since it is more well-known than maybe Islam.
 * You could add a bit more info on the significance on Anubis and his role in weighing if a person was worthy in the afterlife/such tasks that were major in his role.
 * The body of the article continues to be neutral throughout with all religions :)).

Tone and Balance

 * Very neutral information and does well in continuing to the show the significance of the main topic throughout.
 * Balanced information of each religion/culture along with references.

Sources and References

 * Good use of sources in every addition to the article.
 * Your third reference("The 'Gods' of the Egyptians") doesn't seem to work, the page is "not found"
 * Although your sources are good, I think you could benefit from searching on a database for more articles to enhance your article. Here's one I thought was a good one for your Islam portion;

~Berglund, J. (2014). Princely Companion or Object of Offense? The Dog’s Ambiguous Status in Islam. Society & Animals, 22(6), 545–559. https://doi-org.rcc.idm.oclc.org/10.1163/15685306-12341357 https://rcc.idm.oclc.org/login?url=https://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=a9h&AN=99846917&site=ehost-live

Organization

 * The article flows smoothly and I could follow and understand without any issues.
 * Grammar edits;

(Section: Relationships Between Animals...)


 * "There are so many different ways in which animals are perceived, revered, and engaged with within the context of different religions."


 * "Animals, especially dog s , play significant roles in religious narratives, rituals, and symbolism, which demonstrates how they often serve as metaphors for spiritual lessons."

(Section: Mesopotamia)


 * "Similar as  to  the ancient Egypt's relationship of with dogs in religion, in ancient Mesopotamia, the goddess Gula was symbolized by a dog, emphasizing the animal's role in healing and protection ."

(Section: Chinese Tradition)


 * "Guardians of Temples and Homes: Dogs have been regarded as protectors and guardians in the Chinese culture."


 * "This tradition of utilizing dogs as protectors is deeply ingrained in Chinese culture that which emphasizes their role as symbols of loyalty and vigilance."

(Section: Contemporary Perspectives)


 * "This evolving landscape of beliefs highlights the dynamic interplay between religious traditions, cultural contexts, and contemporary ethical considerations in relation to our four-legged companions, or also known as a "man's best friend"'

Good job so far!! Can't wait to see the final product:))